OK thanks for the input guys! I did a rewrite of just the text before asking. I will slowly try to work bullets and/or wows into the tops of the pages.

I think site looks good! But no call to action and its a little boring,I know that sounds a little crazy,It took me a few to figure out why people were not staying long enough.I really think you need to stand out from others,Look at others and see what would make you call..Here is my site, Not perfect either but i get a pretty good conversion..http://www.organiccarpetcare.com