Hello everyone, A few more window cleaning jobs and I will be getting my op package . Can someone crituque my paragraph for my quarterly newsletter to my clients.
"I am offering an introductory special of living room and hallway for our Grand Opening. Call for free in home estimate. 100% satisfaction guaranteed or it’s free!
I am now offering premium-quality, rapid-drying, chemical-free and odor-free carpet cleaning.. The result is thorough cleaning and quick drying; vastly superior to typical wand results. The carpets will be dry in an hour or less! This means that your carpet will be drier faster and your carpets will look, stay, and feel cleaner longer.
In addition to carpet cleaning we will be offering tile and grout cleaning services"

Thanks all
Jerry

Jerry, I would be more clear about what the "special" is, also if you can remember the size and condition of your clients living room you can include the price in your letter. Good luck and let us know how it goes